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Post by Cherrysky♫ on Sept 14, 2007 17:24:15 GMT -8
Ok so this was the first poem...thingy that I ever did. I call it a poem thingy because its not really a poem...its more like a string of words that expressed how I was feeling at the time. I may post some more later on, depending on how things go with this one Have you ever felt like life has turned it's back on you, And yet something good always happens. Have you ever felt alone and isolated, And yet someone, somewhere is always there to talk to. Have you ever felt as if your useless and unwanted, And yet someone always makes you feel like you are needed. Have you ever felt like nothing is worth it any more and you feel like giving up, And yet theres this infallible force that makes you believe theres still hope. Have you ever felt as if life is so freaking boring and pointless, And yet you find ways to enjoy every minute of it. Have you ever felt like love is a sham thing that only exists in fairy tales, And yet theres always that someone that makes you change your mind. Have you ever felt as if life is drowning you in a never-ending pool of water, And yet you can still breath. Have you ever?[/size][/color]
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Post by ~.:Sunfur the Loyal:.~ on Sept 14, 2007 17:29:56 GMT -8
Oh wow.... thats so eloquent! I love it! I really do!!
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Post by Cherrysky♫ on Sept 21, 2007 18:05:32 GMT -8
Thankies Sunny
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Post by ~.:Sunfur the Loyal:.~ on Sept 21, 2007 18:16:04 GMT -8
It's the truth!
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Post by shadekit on Sept 22, 2007 7:45:49 GMT -8
Thats really good! I love it!
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Post by .:Zodiac Suki:. on Sept 22, 2007 7:53:06 GMT -8
Wow...this is superb or however you spell it! I've always felt like this at some points, but this is really good! You should write more poems!
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Post by Cherrysky♫ on Sept 23, 2007 12:20:07 GMT -8
lol thank you guys And yes Twilight, I think I will
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Post by raquaza on Sept 23, 2007 12:33:21 GMT -8
Wow! That's great! *luffs* I couldn't write poems for my life xD ((btw, I updated my bio and pmed u =3))
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