Post by ~.:Flamesong~The Tom Hater:.~ on Sept 7, 2007 16:39:32 GMT -8
((Ok,Cherry,Sunny I know I am using your charries,so don't kill me,also if I use your charrie,I am sorry,but this could be a real interesting story!!You have to forgive my beginning though,I'm not good with beginnings.Also,I'm not good w/grammer,and I will do my best w/spelling!))
Flamepaw,Sunpaw,and Foxpaw all looked at each other on thier first patrol by themselves,their eyes dull with boredom.Flamepaw sighed.Her friends did the same.After a long moment of silence Foxpaw said
"So how is training for you guys?",she asked.Flamepaw and Sunpaw's eyes lit up.
"Shyfire's a great mentor!",Sunpaw purred.Flamepaw nodded
"Firestar is the best!',she said.Foxpaw shook her head,
"Lionflame's the best mentor!",she teased.The three continued comparing mentors.Then,an unfamiliar sent trickled into their noses."Rouge!",they all thought.They watched anxiously as three dark shadowy figures made their ways toward them.There was a white tom,a black tom,and a gray tom.None had any markings on them exept lots of scars.Flamepaw hissed at the toms.Toms disgusted her.
"Who are you!",she snarled at the toms.The toms smirked evily.
"I'm Frost",said the white one tom evily.
"Shade",the black one hissed.
"Cinder",the gray one snarled.The three apprentices looked scared,exept for Flamepaw.She hated toms with all of her heart and in one swift movement she was on the white one's back.
"You stupid tom!!",she hissed,anger flaring in her bright blue eyes.The tom yowled in surprise,then threw Flamepaw off.Flamepaw hit the ground,hard and stayed there,limp.She was hurt,but she wasn't seriously injured.
[/size][/color]Flamepaw,Sunpaw,and Foxpaw all looked at each other on thier first patrol by themselves,their eyes dull with boredom.Flamepaw sighed.Her friends did the same.After a long moment of silence Foxpaw said
"So how is training for you guys?",she asked.Flamepaw and Sunpaw's eyes lit up.
"Shyfire's a great mentor!",Sunpaw purred.Flamepaw nodded
"Firestar is the best!',she said.Foxpaw shook her head,
"Lionflame's the best mentor!",she teased.The three continued comparing mentors.Then,an unfamiliar sent trickled into their noses."Rouge!",they all thought.They watched anxiously as three dark shadowy figures made their ways toward them.There was a white tom,a black tom,and a gray tom.None had any markings on them exept lots of scars.Flamepaw hissed at the toms.Toms disgusted her.
"Who are you!",she snarled at the toms.The toms smirked evily.
"I'm Frost",said the white one tom evily.
"Shade",the black one hissed.
"Cinder",the gray one snarled.The three apprentices looked scared,exept for Flamepaw.She hated toms with all of her heart and in one swift movement she was on the white one's back.
"You stupid tom!!",she hissed,anger flaring in her bright blue eyes.The tom yowled in surprise,then threw Flamepaw off.Flamepaw hit the ground,hard and stayed there,limp.She was hurt,but she wasn't seriously injured.
