Post by swifthawk on Dec 23, 2007 18:15:19 GMT -8
This is my most popular naruto story on fanfiction, I hope you enjoy it, its way better after the first chapter or two ><.
Sakura was walking in the forest, she was all alone as always. She was not on a mission today, there was none. She sighed as she walked, she walked past Naruto and Hinata who were together. They had been together for a year now. Saturday was their anniversary. Every one was going.
She acknowledged them as she went by. But did not stay to chat. She was not feeling well. She saw Sasuke practicing, she stayed hidden from him, she liked him but she knew Sasuke would never like her back. She smiled at the sight of him sometimes, but not today. She was in a bad mood today.
“Hey Forehead girl!” Every one would say to her. Her forehead was just so big. She hated it. The only people who did not call her that were Naruto, Hinata, Ino and Sasuke. Sasuke because he never talked to her. She slid past him and went home.
She arrived home and she lay on her bed doing nothing all night long. Every one had a boy friend except her at this age. She was 16 and one of the only girls who had no one. Even the fan girls of Sasuke had boy friends. She was a loser.
Her Alarm clock rang. ‘Beep, Beep, Beep.’ She turned it off and got ready for more training with group 7. When she got to where they met Naruto was eating Raman again. And Sasuke was leaning against a pole.
She did not look at Sasuke today like she always did. Even Kakashi asked if something was wrong. Her answer to ever thing asked about her was ‘Nothing’. She noticed Sasuke was acting off today as well. The reason she was so upset was because they day before yesterday Wednesday her parents were told to go on a mission. And now she was all alone. She had to get a job soon as well because other wise she would go hungry.
She started looking around for jobs early Saturday. She found one at a local clothing store. She started work right away and already by 3:30 she had enough money for four days worth amount of food and some new clothes.
She hurried home and put on the new clothes she got on sale and 30 employ discount. She had shower and raced off to Hinata’s house for the anniversary. She got there 5 minutes late, it started at 4:00.
They had ordered a DJ and a hall. So they all drove in some ones car to the Hall. It was Elks Hall. It was a small comfortable hall. They danced all night but Sakura could not get into her normal partying mood. There was sometimes a slow song and every one was dancing but Sasuke and Sakura. One times Negi dared Sasuke to ask a girl to dance on the next song. He took the dare.
Ino then raced to the DJ. He nodded. She was up to something. The song that was on almost ended at Sasuke almost died when he heard the song he had to dance to. The song Concert Angle. A Slow song. Sasuke was growing and every one was laughing very quickly every one took their boyfriend’s and girlfriend’s hand a started to dance. Every one but Sasuke and Skaura. He sighed.
“Would you like to dance?” He asked and winced. She nodded. She loved this song and now she was dancing with Sasuke. They boy she liked. He was a good dancer and she suddenly started to sing to the song. She did not mean to.
Sasuke was amazed at Sakura’s voice it was perfectly singing to the song. And her voice was just flowing out like she did not know she was singing. It was amazing. The song stopped and so did the singing and the dancing. Sakura raced over to get a drink like she was embarrassed.
“There’s no need to be shy about your voice you know.” He said coming up behind her. She jumped.
“Oh um s-sorry.” She stuttered. He sighed, he knew he would regret this later.
“Your voice is very nice by the w-way. He said quietly so no one would hear him.
“Oh… Thanks.” She said. She then raced over to her friends. They were all smirking at something. She tried to look at what but they hid it quickly. She frowned and asked. They said nothing. She then noticed that Ino had not been dancing with anyone, not even her boyfriend. She wounded why.
He noticed Sasuke staring at Ino. But he was glaring at her. She wounded why. The night wore on and soon another slow song. Every one but Naruto and Hinata. Even Sasuke was dancing again. With her! He had asked her this time and he was not dared. She sang softly to the song Heaven candle light version as they danced. He did not mind. He found her voice beautiful. She noticed that Sasuke was not as stiff this time as they danced. The song soon ended. And this time she did not race off. She went straight to her friends crowded around Naruto but again hid it from her and Sasuke.
The last song was that one the DJ left but every one stayed a bit longer to chat and hang. They then gave out presents to Hinata and Naruto, she gave Naruto A cup of Raman. He loved that. And she gave Hinata a dress and necklace. She bought it at the store she now worked at. She loved all the presents she was given. Every one gave Naruto the same thing. Raman or free Raman at the place he eats it most.
Every one now went home. She was not hungry when she arrived home because of all the food that was there. They had found out about her parents on a mission and she was on her won they gave her some of the party food to take home. They were so kind to her. She soon fell asleep in her warm bed.
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Chapter 1
Never Alone
The Dance
Never Alone
The Dance
Sakura was walking in the forest, she was all alone as always. She was not on a mission today, there was none. She sighed as she walked, she walked past Naruto and Hinata who were together. They had been together for a year now. Saturday was their anniversary. Every one was going.
She acknowledged them as she went by. But did not stay to chat. She was not feeling well. She saw Sasuke practicing, she stayed hidden from him, she liked him but she knew Sasuke would never like her back. She smiled at the sight of him sometimes, but not today. She was in a bad mood today.
“Hey Forehead girl!” Every one would say to her. Her forehead was just so big. She hated it. The only people who did not call her that were Naruto, Hinata, Ino and Sasuke. Sasuke because he never talked to her. She slid past him and went home.
She arrived home and she lay on her bed doing nothing all night long. Every one had a boy friend except her at this age. She was 16 and one of the only girls who had no one. Even the fan girls of Sasuke had boy friends. She was a loser.
Her Alarm clock rang. ‘Beep, Beep, Beep.’ She turned it off and got ready for more training with group 7. When she got to where they met Naruto was eating Raman again. And Sasuke was leaning against a pole.
She did not look at Sasuke today like she always did. Even Kakashi asked if something was wrong. Her answer to ever thing asked about her was ‘Nothing’. She noticed Sasuke was acting off today as well. The reason she was so upset was because they day before yesterday Wednesday her parents were told to go on a mission. And now she was all alone. She had to get a job soon as well because other wise she would go hungry.
She started looking around for jobs early Saturday. She found one at a local clothing store. She started work right away and already by 3:30 she had enough money for four days worth amount of food and some new clothes.
She hurried home and put on the new clothes she got on sale and 30 employ discount. She had shower and raced off to Hinata’s house for the anniversary. She got there 5 minutes late, it started at 4:00.
They had ordered a DJ and a hall. So they all drove in some ones car to the Hall. It was Elks Hall. It was a small comfortable hall. They danced all night but Sakura could not get into her normal partying mood. There was sometimes a slow song and every one was dancing but Sasuke and Sakura. One times Negi dared Sasuke to ask a girl to dance on the next song. He took the dare.
Ino then raced to the DJ. He nodded. She was up to something. The song that was on almost ended at Sasuke almost died when he heard the song he had to dance to. The song Concert Angle. A Slow song. Sasuke was growing and every one was laughing very quickly every one took their boyfriend’s and girlfriend’s hand a started to dance. Every one but Sasuke and Skaura. He sighed.
“Would you like to dance?” He asked and winced. She nodded. She loved this song and now she was dancing with Sasuke. They boy she liked. He was a good dancer and she suddenly started to sing to the song. She did not mean to.
Sasuke was amazed at Sakura’s voice it was perfectly singing to the song. And her voice was just flowing out like she did not know she was singing. It was amazing. The song stopped and so did the singing and the dancing. Sakura raced over to get a drink like she was embarrassed.
“There’s no need to be shy about your voice you know.” He said coming up behind her. She jumped.
“Oh um s-sorry.” She stuttered. He sighed, he knew he would regret this later.
“Your voice is very nice by the w-way. He said quietly so no one would hear him.
“Oh… Thanks.” She said. She then raced over to her friends. They were all smirking at something. She tried to look at what but they hid it quickly. She frowned and asked. They said nothing. She then noticed that Ino had not been dancing with anyone, not even her boyfriend. She wounded why.
He noticed Sasuke staring at Ino. But he was glaring at her. She wounded why. The night wore on and soon another slow song. Every one but Naruto and Hinata. Even Sasuke was dancing again. With her! He had asked her this time and he was not dared. She sang softly to the song Heaven candle light version as they danced. He did not mind. He found her voice beautiful. She noticed that Sasuke was not as stiff this time as they danced. The song soon ended. And this time she did not race off. She went straight to her friends crowded around Naruto but again hid it from her and Sasuke.
The last song was that one the DJ left but every one stayed a bit longer to chat and hang. They then gave out presents to Hinata and Naruto, she gave Naruto A cup of Raman. He loved that. And she gave Hinata a dress and necklace. She bought it at the store she now worked at. She loved all the presents she was given. Every one gave Naruto the same thing. Raman or free Raman at the place he eats it most.
Every one now went home. She was not hungry when she arrived home because of all the food that was there. They had found out about her parents on a mission and she was on her won they gave her some of the party food to take home. They were so kind to her. She soon fell asleep in her warm bed.
Thanks, please if you want to review go here: www.fanfiction.net/secure/live_preview.php?storyid=3650331
or just review here, its better there because then it counts and more peop;e will see that it is popular