Post by duskmourn on Oct 7, 2007 19:44:37 GMT -8
Soul Rain
By : Duskmourn
Fire burns against fire
Souls are torn apart
Blood will run forever
Demons in the dark
Will turn to rain
-the prophecy
Prologue
The whole pack cried that night. Hot tears streamed down their muzzles. One of the greatest leaders was going to heaven. The wolves let out a crying howl. Even the enemy pack howled, The leader had helped them in hard times. The rain pored as if heaven itself was crying for the fallen leader. Her mate sat in silence
“Why did it have to be her?” he whimpered “why did it come to this” he wiped his eyes with his scared paw. She was so peaceful, and seeing her dead scared body made him shudder. His normally pitch black fur was pale and ashen. His brilliant green eyes were filled with sorrow, and hate. His mind confused and his heart had lost the will to live. His soul even seemed to leave.
“she will always be with us” a black she wolf said” as long as we never forget her and all the things she did. His soul seemed to return ,and his gaze looked upon his friend
“I will never forget” he growled “no one will
Chapter 1:the beginning
I like to watch the puddles gather rain
Its not sane
-No Rain by Blind Melon
It was a hot summer day. Music of life could be heard The birds sang and from a small distance you could hear little yips from a near by cave. Twenty or so wolves waited outside the cave, knowing if they went in the mother would chew their tails off. When finally all the new pups were born the father ,ghost, could finally see his pups. The alpha quietly padded his way in careful not to make a sound.
“its ok ghost ,” the mother ,Suka, said” their ears are closed shut they cannot hear you” Ghost let out his breath, nervousness shaking his entire body. He looked at his pups there were three, Two white ones, boys, and one pitch-black, a girl.
“have you named them yet?” Ghost asked.
“no,” She shook her head and licked the girl on the head” we will each name one and name the third one together” Suka was exhausted this was her first litter.
“can I name the first born?” Ghost asked
“yes “ Suka licked one of the white ones “this is him” The father swelled with pride. His first one was a boy, and he looked like his dad.
“Ice” ghost yipped” his name is Ice.”
“and I will name the other boy.” Suka barked” Moon, and can we name the girl Rain” The father felt a little disappointed. He personally wanted to name her Night ,but his name gave birth to the pups so he nodded. Ghost licked his pups “shall we let the others see?” ghost asked. Suka nodded. Ghost barked and the rest of the pack lined in. This was the whole pack. These were all the wolves from the three separate divisions. The pack Ghost and Suka were in was the Noble pack. The noble pack contained 7 now ten wolves. They were the two alphas and the five strongest and the smartest wolves, and the new pups. The noble pack came in first Phantom, ghosts sister, Demnix, his brother, Zenos ,fang ,and the youngest Lilly. They looked at the pups and said nice things like “how cute” and asked for their names. Next the secondary pack came in it had five members. They were the Guardian pack, Their job was to protect and aid any of the other divisions. Lastly there was the Omega pack which had ten wolves. These were all the elders and weakest wolves. After all the pack had seen the pups Suka barked at them telling them to go their separate ways. Once they had all left she looked back at her pups. Ice was biting rain the pup squirmed away. Suka frowned how aggressive. She shook it away and separated the pups. Once they were asleep she curled around them feeling their warmth though her fur.
**********
Rain looked up and saw a dark figure. It stood on two paws and its ears were at the side of its head. She had been tormented by this shape since she was a pup. The dark figure turned its red eyes glared bright and menacingly. Slowly its shape turned into a familiar shape, a wolf. . It looked strait at her and muttered a word that had haunted her whole life. ”blood” then the wolf creature charged it bit her neck and Rain woke up to Moon standing right above her. His big blue eyes filled with worry.
“the nightmare again?” Moon asked
“yeah” Rain answered” I see it all the time but…it never gets less frightening”
“I’m sorry” just then something tackled Rain furiously biting her neck. Rain screeched so loud and high pitched that dogs everywhere were quaking for their ears were in so much pain.
“that was to easy!” Ice gloated. Rain still trembling glared at her brother” Why do you hate me!” she growled
“’cause one you’re the youngest, two I’m oldest, and three your so weird!” he laughed as he walked off. Rain sighed her brother had always been like this. He would sometimes pick on Moon, but mostly Rain. She looked at her pitch-black paws, and hated how different she was. Her eyes were grey, where her brothers were both blue. Her pitch-black coat was the complete opposite of her paler brothers, and the whole pack. Personally she didn’t even know if she was born of this pack. She sighed again. Her brothers had proceeded to play fighting, a game Rain never wished to join. She was bored. Nothing ever happened, and until they were half year they couldn’t venture outside the cave den. She silently licked her fur. Though black, Her fur was the most beautiful. Her coat had a shine and a smoothness to it no ones else’s had, and it would only be better if it was pale. She spun around now licking her tail. Her smooth fur was soft under her tongue. She stood up bored out of her mind and walked over to the edge of the cave and. She scratched the hard surface of the dirt. She scratched harder making a cloud of dust, she started coughing and decided it was a bad idea. Then a fur ball of silvery-white came into focus right up at her face. Before she realized it Ice was growling at her.
“You are useless!” he growled
“Just leave me alone !” rain snarled “I don’t bother you!”
“yes you do your bothering me right now!”
“HOW!”
“you being alive bothers me!” suddenly a flash of pure white hit Ice
“she said leave her alone!” Moon growled “stop being a jerk!
“look who is so tough now!” Ice said
“its fine Moon just drop it” Rain barked not wanting a real fight. The day slowly passed by with not much of any thing happening. Finally their parents came home with a full grown deer
“why something so healthy dad?” Rain asked her father.
“most all of um are healthy like this one this year.” ghost yipped with joy
“that means food will be good the rest of the year! ”Suka barked.” Now lets howl our respects to the great Fenrir .”Every wolf howled singing a different and unique pitch. Every song was beautiful, but every one was so different .RAIN took her first bite after her mom and dad, and let the warm blood seep into her mouth. It was great. She twitched feeling a sharp pain on her shoulder. Rain yawned not thinking any more about the pain she was ready for bed. She started walking towards the nest and stepped on a sharp rock that pierced her paw pad. She let out a small yelp, But she kept walking through the pain. It was a cold winters-end night ,and she was happy to curl up in the soft furs of deer they had eaten. She closed her eyes and fell into a deep sleep.
* * *
Rain knew where she was she was in the dark abyss of her dream world, And there on cue was the dark figure but it wasn’t menacing.
“help me wolf!” it said. Rain cocked her head. It wasn’t scary it was the voice of a pup.
“I’ve called to you yet you run away, please help me!” it said
“Why do you come to my dreams!” Rain demanded “and after scaring me my wh-” TAP….. Tap….tap.
* * *
(crituques are fine ^^ hope you enjoyed it)
By : Duskmourn
Fire burns against fire
Souls are torn apart
Blood will run forever
Demons in the dark
Will turn to rain
-the prophecy
Prologue
The whole pack cried that night. Hot tears streamed down their muzzles. One of the greatest leaders was going to heaven. The wolves let out a crying howl. Even the enemy pack howled, The leader had helped them in hard times. The rain pored as if heaven itself was crying for the fallen leader. Her mate sat in silence
“Why did it have to be her?” he whimpered “why did it come to this” he wiped his eyes with his scared paw. She was so peaceful, and seeing her dead scared body made him shudder. His normally pitch black fur was pale and ashen. His brilliant green eyes were filled with sorrow, and hate. His mind confused and his heart had lost the will to live. His soul even seemed to leave.
“she will always be with us” a black she wolf said” as long as we never forget her and all the things she did. His soul seemed to return ,and his gaze looked upon his friend
“I will never forget” he growled “no one will
Chapter 1:the beginning
I like to watch the puddles gather rain
Its not sane
-No Rain by Blind Melon
It was a hot summer day. Music of life could be heard The birds sang and from a small distance you could hear little yips from a near by cave. Twenty or so wolves waited outside the cave, knowing if they went in the mother would chew their tails off. When finally all the new pups were born the father ,ghost, could finally see his pups. The alpha quietly padded his way in careful not to make a sound.
“its ok ghost ,” the mother ,Suka, said” their ears are closed shut they cannot hear you” Ghost let out his breath, nervousness shaking his entire body. He looked at his pups there were three, Two white ones, boys, and one pitch-black, a girl.
“have you named them yet?” Ghost asked.
“no,” She shook her head and licked the girl on the head” we will each name one and name the third one together” Suka was exhausted this was her first litter.
“can I name the first born?” Ghost asked
“yes “ Suka licked one of the white ones “this is him” The father swelled with pride. His first one was a boy, and he looked like his dad.
“Ice” ghost yipped” his name is Ice.”
“and I will name the other boy.” Suka barked” Moon, and can we name the girl Rain” The father felt a little disappointed. He personally wanted to name her Night ,but his name gave birth to the pups so he nodded. Ghost licked his pups “shall we let the others see?” ghost asked. Suka nodded. Ghost barked and the rest of the pack lined in. This was the whole pack. These were all the wolves from the three separate divisions. The pack Ghost and Suka were in was the Noble pack. The noble pack contained 7 now ten wolves. They were the two alphas and the five strongest and the smartest wolves, and the new pups. The noble pack came in first Phantom, ghosts sister, Demnix, his brother, Zenos ,fang ,and the youngest Lilly. They looked at the pups and said nice things like “how cute” and asked for their names. Next the secondary pack came in it had five members. They were the Guardian pack, Their job was to protect and aid any of the other divisions. Lastly there was the Omega pack which had ten wolves. These were all the elders and weakest wolves. After all the pack had seen the pups Suka barked at them telling them to go their separate ways. Once they had all left she looked back at her pups. Ice was biting rain the pup squirmed away. Suka frowned how aggressive. She shook it away and separated the pups. Once they were asleep she curled around them feeling their warmth though her fur.
**********
Rain looked up and saw a dark figure. It stood on two paws and its ears were at the side of its head. She had been tormented by this shape since she was a pup. The dark figure turned its red eyes glared bright and menacingly. Slowly its shape turned into a familiar shape, a wolf. . It looked strait at her and muttered a word that had haunted her whole life. ”blood” then the wolf creature charged it bit her neck and Rain woke up to Moon standing right above her. His big blue eyes filled with worry.
“the nightmare again?” Moon asked
“yeah” Rain answered” I see it all the time but…it never gets less frightening”
“I’m sorry” just then something tackled Rain furiously biting her neck. Rain screeched so loud and high pitched that dogs everywhere were quaking for their ears were in so much pain.
“that was to easy!” Ice gloated. Rain still trembling glared at her brother” Why do you hate me!” she growled
“’cause one you’re the youngest, two I’m oldest, and three your so weird!” he laughed as he walked off. Rain sighed her brother had always been like this. He would sometimes pick on Moon, but mostly Rain. She looked at her pitch-black paws, and hated how different she was. Her eyes were grey, where her brothers were both blue. Her pitch-black coat was the complete opposite of her paler brothers, and the whole pack. Personally she didn’t even know if she was born of this pack. She sighed again. Her brothers had proceeded to play fighting, a game Rain never wished to join. She was bored. Nothing ever happened, and until they were half year they couldn’t venture outside the cave den. She silently licked her fur. Though black, Her fur was the most beautiful. Her coat had a shine and a smoothness to it no ones else’s had, and it would only be better if it was pale. She spun around now licking her tail. Her smooth fur was soft under her tongue. She stood up bored out of her mind and walked over to the edge of the cave and. She scratched the hard surface of the dirt. She scratched harder making a cloud of dust, she started coughing and decided it was a bad idea. Then a fur ball of silvery-white came into focus right up at her face. Before she realized it Ice was growling at her.
“You are useless!” he growled
“Just leave me alone !” rain snarled “I don’t bother you!”
“yes you do your bothering me right now!”
“HOW!”
“you being alive bothers me!” suddenly a flash of pure white hit Ice
“she said leave her alone!” Moon growled “stop being a jerk!
“look who is so tough now!” Ice said
“its fine Moon just drop it” Rain barked not wanting a real fight. The day slowly passed by with not much of any thing happening. Finally their parents came home with a full grown deer
“why something so healthy dad?” Rain asked her father.
“most all of um are healthy like this one this year.” ghost yipped with joy
“that means food will be good the rest of the year! ”Suka barked.” Now lets howl our respects to the great Fenrir .”Every wolf howled singing a different and unique pitch. Every song was beautiful, but every one was so different .RAIN took her first bite after her mom and dad, and let the warm blood seep into her mouth. It was great. She twitched feeling a sharp pain on her shoulder. Rain yawned not thinking any more about the pain she was ready for bed. She started walking towards the nest and stepped on a sharp rock that pierced her paw pad. She let out a small yelp, But she kept walking through the pain. It was a cold winters-end night ,and she was happy to curl up in the soft furs of deer they had eaten. She closed her eyes and fell into a deep sleep.
* * *
Rain knew where she was she was in the dark abyss of her dream world, And there on cue was the dark figure but it wasn’t menacing.
“help me wolf!” it said. Rain cocked her head. It wasn’t scary it was the voice of a pup.
“I’ve called to you yet you run away, please help me!” it said
“Why do you come to my dreams!” Rain demanded “and after scaring me my wh-” TAP….. Tap….tap.
* * *
(crituques are fine ^^ hope you enjoyed it)