Rose

[TigerEyes]

A man held out a flower
and his lover he held near
"But why a rose?" the maiden asked
as fell a happy tear

His voice rang out through the night
and his smile set her free
"You'd understand my darling,
if you'd only look and see."

"It's beauty is timeless
as is my love for you
and i'd give up forever
to hear you say, you love me too"

The madien smiled kindly
and gave the man a wink
"You ask much of me fair sir
and I fear your heart may sink"

"A roses thorns are dangerously sharp,
as is a madiens tounge
but none the less these words are true,
my heart, dear sir, you've won"

Just wanted to see what you guys all thought

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-gasps- are you a poet?
It's realy good!

[Birchwind the Elegant<nodelete]

No i'm not a poet i'm just in love wiht opera and shakespear and a hopless romantic who loves to write.

[~.:Goldenflame the Watchful:.~]

*Jaw drops and hits the floor. Once I regain control,*

YOU ARE AMAZING!!!!!!!!

[Mama Spirit]

Well sunny I already knew you thought that! *huggleS* I'm gogin to post a new one wihtin the next couple days. I think it's pretty good, i'll leave that up to you guys.

[TigerEyes]

Okay so here's a couple more poems I wrote last weekend quickly.

There she is again
Lost, hidden, forgotten.
Do you see her?
Frost bitten cheeks,
Glazed eyes reflecting her past
You walk by her everyday
Do you see her?
Heartbroken, shattered.
No life, no soul.
Do you see her?
There she is again
Hunted, tortured, followed
By the hovering darkness
of death





Would happiness be so happy
without grief?
Would spring be so welcomed
without winter?
Love so great without heartbreak?
Day so bright without night?
Why weep the lost when new life
has been givin?
Why hate, Why cry
Why complain or sigh?
Why world, Why?
Why fear falling
when it teaches us to fly?





So what do you guys think?

[Mama Spirit]

Race

Standing, Watching, as the world spins uncontroled

Spitful anger boils the red rivers of men

Tainted smiled look away and cover their ears

Pretend they did not hear

Silent screams echo into a silent night

Ringing louder and louder, shattering the crystal shilds of reality

Babes bath in red whine, Adults sink in green greed

Skin deep, the colour of men leads

to an irreversable ending

Stand up, Speak up, open your judging eyes to the world

Souls of men are greater then frigile bones

Still, the world spins uncontroled

We watch, we stand, and turn away

We are blind, deaf and mute as we go our way